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a bruised rose petal falls by ~selahdreams:iconselahdreams:





I will never forget-

The slight quaver in her voice-

The tears coating heavy eyelids - eyelids heavy with fear and misery-

The almost invisible shudder that coursed through her nerves-

When she p
                o
                  u
                   r
                   e
                    d
                        o
                         u
                          t
                             her heart-

And laid bare every exhausted fiber and pulsating muscle and hidden story and quiet heartache-

With three crushing, crying, despairing, dying words-

"He beat me."
©2007-2009 ~selahdreams
:iconselahdreams:

Author's Comments

Preview picture courtesy of [link]
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This poem is based partially on true events.

EDIT: Full title is "a bruised rose petal falls and is silent".

Comments


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:icontwistedcat:
wow...great piece

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If you want her then TELL HER cause she can WAIT but she wont wait FOREVER.

Never have regrets cause at one point, everything you did was exactly what you wanted.

torn between...what i loved...what i like...and what i lust for....
:iconselahdreams:
Thank you ;)

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Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That's relativity... -Albert Einstein
:icongipmit:
Aww wow! that's so sad =[ but wow really really good
:icondabuttacupness:
love the way it's typed

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:heart::tombstone:In loving memory of Nick:tombstone::heart:



:toast:


:faint: <-- My dA version of -falls over-
:iconselahdreams:
Thank you! :)

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Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That's relativity... -Albert Einstein
:icondabuttacupness:
:)

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:heart::tombstone:In loving memory of Nick:tombstone::heart:



:toast:


:faint: <-- My dA version of -falls over-
:iconharkanwal:
I am surprised that this piece has not received the attention that it deserves. I think it's very well written, and has a touch of beauty, the sad kind.
:iconselahdreams:
Thank you very much and thank you for the :+fav:; I need to write more :(

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Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That's relativity... -Albert Einstein
:iconselahdreams:
Thankies! :glomp:

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Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. That's relativity... -Albert Einstein

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